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44 pages 1 hour read

Robert McKee

Story: Substance, Structure, Style, and the Principles of Screenwriting

Nonfiction | Reference/Text Book | Adult | Published in 1997

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Part 4, Chapter 18-EpilogueChapter Summaries & Analyses

Part 4: “The Writer at Work”

Part 4, Chapter 18 Summary: “The Text”

The chapter opens with “Dialogue,” which explains the features of effective cinematic dialogue. It should not mirror natural dialogue, which is often awkward and disjointed; rather, it should say the most possible in the fewest words while retaining the flair and flavor of natural speech. Every line of dialogue should build a pattern of action and reaction, supporting the subtext, motivations, and turning points of the scene. Dialogue should be an additional layer that clarifies visual expression but never replaces it.

“Description” explores how immediacy and specificity create a clear vision of the scene on the page. McKee uses an example scene to illustrate the minimal use of camera direction and notation. “Image systems” goes deeper into the visual aspect of a screenplay by discussing imagery, symbolism, and motifs. These must be subtle and subliminal to communicate unconsciously with the audience. An external image system is based on symbolism that already exists in our wider cultural consciousness; an internal image system builds on the world of the story. McKee provides examples of both from popular films. Lastly, the chapter visits the subject of titles, which can be used in their own symbolic way and communicate the genre of the film.

Part 4, Chapter 19 Summary: “A Writer’s Method”

This chapter revisits an earlier concept in much more depth: writing from the outside in versus writing from the inside out. A struggling writer who attempts to beat his screenplay into submission so that it will fit his story vision is engaging in the former; the latter includes the professional writer who carefully plots multiple story paths before putting them together in a final narrative outline, called a “treatment,” before finally expanding it into a finished screenplay. This allows the screenwriter to address issues and inconsistencies as they come up without having to scrap and rework an entire story. McKee outlines his personal method within these three steps in detail.

Epilogue Summary: “Fade Out”

This final epilogue closes with a fable about a millipede learning the difference between instinct and craft and a final call to action: “[W]rite every day, line by line, page by page, hour by hour. […] Follow the quest for stories told with meaning and beauty” (419).

Part 4, Chapter 18-Epilogue Analysis

Having laid a foundation, McKee reaches the nitty-gritty application of the craft in “The Text” and “A Writer’s Method.” The first section explores dialogue, description, and camera direction, as well as what to include and what not to include. This is another place where truth and fact start to diverge, as McKee tells us that “dialogue is not conversation” (388). It is not literal fact, but something deeper and truer than fact. The section “Image Systems” compares the screenwriter to a poet (here McKee knowingly contradicts an earlier statement where he says they are mutually exclusive, admitting that was a lie) and the system of visual symbols and motifs in a film to rhyme schemes and other poetic devices. It is worth noting that McKee drew another parallel between film and poetry earlier in the text when considering the idea of “creative limitation”: Story suggested that a poet working within the confines of poetic structure mirrors the screenwriter working within the confines of genre convention. This suggests yet again that all art exists within the same sphere of human need (and communication of that need) and that the boundaries between art forms are perhaps less tangible than we may think.

In the final chapter, “A Writer’s Method,” the author displays his own personal method for developing an idea “from the outside in” (410). Mirroring the very first chapter, this works as a parallel call to action—showing the place where story theory becomes material reality and giving the student the tools to transform their craft and their ideas into a real product. This chapter and the introduction work as “bookends” for the entire screenwriting journey, bringing to mind the sense of unity between the inciting incident and the climax of a story. Here we see that each call to action binds together the work with its very own story “spine,” carrying the reader to the “end of the line” and to a new beginning.

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